Jacob POV Help Wanted

Hello all!

Pants aka Dragonfly76, thought it would be a good idea for me to post this since I am looking for something in particular.

See, I am currently writing a story that starts after the near kiss in the kitchen between Jacob and Bella, now in the sequel that I''m writing, Eclipse the Dawn, I am doing a bit of Jacob POV. I want him to sound a bit like he did when he was narrating Breaking Dawn, the book, but I'm not sure I'm doing it right so far.

So, I need a pre-reader to read just the Jacob POV sections and tell me if it sounds like the same Jacob narrating Breaking Dawn. Someone who is good at getting into Jacob's head from the book is what I'm looking for.

If you can volunteer to do so, please leave a comment here, or if you have a suggestion of who can do it, please leave a comment too. I'd appreciate the help because I honestly don't think I'm writing Jacob's POV the way it was in Breaking Dawn.

Also, while Breaking Dawn was basically PG13, my fic is taking PG13 Jacob and making him evolve into a R-rating type Jacob, if you get my drift. Still, the evolution needs to seem "natural", he cannot turn into an "Alpha" male overnight.

If you're interested, leave a comment and we can discuss pre-reading possibilities via private chat or private message.

Thanks! Hugs!

-Shadow